draft about how our selected new / non-traditional narrative is creating a different kind of experience for the audience in order to send a particular message that has a larger social consequence. For this draft you should have, at the end of your introduction (or context paragraph if you are using one), a working central claim with a position, consequence, and sense of significance and, as the first sentence of each of your support paragraphs, a distinct subclaim, each with a specific element and analytical point.
please type your responses to these questions as a way to allow us provide better feedback and conversation in the workshop of your draft. While you should try to use the concepts of subclaims and central claim (etc.) as they apply, do respond here in a way that’s most comfortable for you: